Dammit—I’ve only just noticed what they were all tracking … the bubbles. It was the group that held my eye until return.
Could that shot be improved by tightening, do you think? Crop out the wee vehicle/whatever over on the extreme right … lose a tiny bit of the girl, yes, but not enough to ruin the shot.
Yes, I think cropping the vehicle and maybe even the girl on the right would make a better shot. To be honest, I didn’t notice the bubbles at first. If she’d not named it that, I may never have noticed. 🙂 I was so enthralled with the one girl’s arm akimbo that I missed them.
The Artists' Sanctum 
They look B and W.
Don’t they know they’re black and white? Or are kids born innocent and have to be taught the ‘rules’?
A powerful statement by the photographer, more than a simple record.
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Dammit—I’ve only just noticed what they were all tracking … the bubbles. It was the group that held my eye until return.
Could that shot be improved by tightening, do you think? Crop out the wee vehicle/whatever over on the extreme right … lose a tiny bit of the girl, yes, but not enough to ruin the shot.
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Yes, I think cropping the vehicle and maybe even the girl on the right would make a better shot. To be honest, I didn’t notice the bubbles at first. If she’d not named it that, I may never have noticed. 🙂 I was so enthralled with the one girl’s arm akimbo that I missed them.
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I agree completely.
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